Every day, there's one student who found dead inside the abandoned comfort room in our school named DIPLO University. All students who died and found in the C.R were no wounds or no reasons why they died. Except in one, we don't know who is or who the killer/s is. But the killer/s always took the eyes of the victims.
All students are scared to go in the school and attend their classes. But the school administrators promised us, that they will take care of us. We students don't have a choice, but just to attend our classes and go to this freaky school!
In our school, there are two sheriffs assigned in every floor of the buildings. So we feel a little safety.
Anyway, I'm Ann Zamora, 4th year college, and I'm going to tell to you, what is happening in our school. If you are reading this right now, please don't be remain silent. Tell this to anyone, and think a plan how you can help us. I'm just writing down what is happening in our school, we don't know who will be the next victim, but if ever I'm the next, I hope that, you will do something to help and give justice for us victims. Use your eyes. I'm going to tell to you when it was started to happen.
I was 1st year highschool before, when I met my friends. They are; Febie, Remart, Rochelle, Elyssa and Emmerey. We were so happy to met each other. One day, our professor in our major subject, Ms.Oran, announced that we were having a trip in San Fernando Forest and Beach Resort, to take a pictures and make a novel using those beautiful places. We were so excited that time, all of my classmates were excited too. But that excitement, turned into sadness. That night, we were all busy in readying our things for the next day trip. And then, we all received a message in our group chat from our classmate, Angelina. She said that Ms.Oran were dead. We were shocked. We asked Angelina how could she said that, where and how she knew that news. And she told us this:
"I'm sorry guys about this sad news. I'm really sorry. I didn't do anything for Ms. Oran. Forgive me guys, forgive me."
"Angelina? what's wrong with you? we don't get what are you saying. Please girl, tell us what happened. We're here for you, don't worry."
"hey? Angelina? are you still there? come on, reply to us."
Angelina didn't reply anymore, and the next day, in our class, Sir. Ellorin told to us what was happened to Ms. Oran, he said that, Ms.Oran found in the abandoned comfort room in fourth floor in the main building. He said, Ms.Oran was not injured, they didn't know what was the reason and caused of her death. And he followed and said that, Ms.Oran lost her eyes, maybe the killer took her eyes.
That tragedy and murder happened in August 5, 2001. And that was the beggining. Until now, the killer kills one student in a day. 7 students were killed in a week. And we still don't know who the killer is.
After what was happened to Ms.Oran, we received again a bad news, a really bad news, August 2, 2001, Tuesday, 10PM. I recieved a call from my friend Febie, she told me that Angelina was murdered in the school, and found her inside the comfort room. Same place and same on what happened to Ms. Oran, again, the killer took off Angelina's eyes. I was shocked, and I said to Febie;
"Are you kidding? That's not funny man!"
"Come on, Ann! I'm not kidding! I'm serious! They saw Angelina inside the C.R, the same place where Ms. Oran found! Angelina was my close friend too, so there is no great reason that I will use her in this creepy and bullshit bad news!"
"Okay, I'm sorry. I understand what your feeling right now. But, that was so impossible, how could Angelina killed in the school? She's absent right?"
"Yes, I know. I'm really scared. I don't know what to do, Ann."
Febie cried when she was telling that. I need to be strong for her, even I feel scared also that time.
August 3, 2001, I came to school, and I saw many students and police were standing in the abandoned comfort room. I knew there was dead there again, but I didn't expect what I saw.
I saw Febie! Carried by the police. She's dead! I was shocked! I didn't know what to do! I asked myself, why was she?! Why Febie?!
In that day when I saw Febie without eyes and dead, I promised to myself that I will take revenge to which killer did this!
After Ms. Oran, Angelina, and Febie's death, the killer kill more students, the killer didn't stop, until now. Many students were left and transfered to the other schools but they were not exempted. The kille and killed them. I don't killer reason why he/she doing that! But their dead bodies found in the abandoned comfort room of DILPO University.
I know there is something strange happening in our school. I need to know who is the killer, I need to know why she/he doing this! As what I promised before, I will find him/her!
It's now September 1, 2001. There's no new! The killer still kill students. We. Remart, Rochelle, Elyssa and Emmerey were planning to find out who is the killer, so we putted a microchip camera in the wall of fourth floor near in the abandoned C.R. We also put, a tiny voice recorder inside of the C.R. So that, we will know who is the killer. Because I know, later the killer will kill another victim again.
We've decided to have an overnight to my house to watch what will happen.
"Do you think we will find out who's the killer tonight?" Remart asked me.
"I hope, Remart. I'm praying for that." I replied.
"But, what if we will find out him/her? What will we do? Do we tell this to the police?" Rochelle asked me.
"No, no one will know about this." I replied.
We are waiting tonight, and then......
"Ann! come here! There is someone go to the C.R." Elyssa said.
"Turn on the recorder, faster!" I shouted to Emmerey.
We are listening, there's silence at first. Until we heard a strange voice, a voice of a woman saying:
"Hello guys, I know you're listening to me right now. You are so naughty guys. And I like that. I really like that. I just want you to know that, I know who you are. I know the names of five naughty students listening to me right now. See you,soooooooon." (laughing like an EVIL)
I can't speak, before the strange woman left the abandoned C.R, she waved her hands to the hidden camera, and gave us a creepy flying kissed.
"Oh my God! what the hell is going on? Who's that lady, guys?! I'm scared." Elyssa said.
"I think we did a wrong thing! We are all in danger guys!" Emmerey said and she's crying rigth now.
"What if one of us are the next victim? She said she knew us! What if I'm next?! What if......." Remart said
"STOP!!! Stop panicking guys!!!" I shouted.
"We need to tell this to the police" Rochelle said and picked up her phone.
I grab her hand, and get the phone. And said:
"No! No one will know about this! Even you tell this to the police or not, she will do bad to us! We need to be ready! We need to be strong!" I said.
Honestly, I feel scared too. Like what my friends feel. But we need to face and fight this feeling.
After that night, and the Saturday and Sunday passed. And now, its Monday again, I woke up, fixed myself and go to school.
I saw Emmerey ran to me while crying.
"Hey? Why are you crying?!" I asked her.
At first, she can't tell what was happended, because she was shivering and crying. I gave her a water, and we seated down to the bench.
"Ann... I saw the lady, I saw the killer looking at me. she's wearing a joker mask like what she wore when we saw her in the camera." She said.
"And then?"I asked her.
"She threw this crumpled paper to me, I didn't open this, I don't want." She said.
"Give me the paper." I said.
Emmerey gave the paper to me, I opened it and I red it.
"See you in the abandoned place, Emmerey."
I crumpled again the paper, Emmerey asked me what was the written on the paper. But I didn't tell to her.
"Nothing, I want you to stay at your house with your parents. Don't go out alone, alright?" I said to her and she nod.
I brought a knife and came to the abandoned C.R, and waited for the killer. I seated down on the wide sink of the C.R. And I heard a footstep coming from the C.R. So I walked slowly and hide at the back of the door. I brought out the knife and hold it hardly.
The stranger came inside already, he walked, and when I saw her that she had her back. I ran to her and pointed the knife in her neck.
“Don’t move! Or else I am going to kill you!" I said.
"Hey, are you the killer?" A voice of man said.
"Are you a boy?!" I asked
"Yes, please don't kill me!" he begged.
"What are you doing here?" I said.
"I know you are not the killer, because the killer is already dead." He said.
I released my arms to his neck, and dropped the knife.
"What are you saying?" I asked.
"She's dead, I mean she is ghost." He said and looked to me.
"Are you kidding me?!" I shouted.
"Of course not! Anyway, I'm Levin. Come on, let's go out. It's safe here, she's coming." He said and holds my hands and pulled me to go out.
We ran and stopped in front of the DILPO University Gym. It was already 8PM. And we need to stay there because the school was already closed.
He told me everything.
"Why are you there?" I asked.
He looked at me and said “I just want to make sure that you are safe."
"What? How did you.......?"
"Your friend Emmerey is my classmate in Philippine History, and she told me to follow and take care of you. Because she knows that you are going to meet the killer, like what the killer wanted to Emmerey do." He explained.
I was shocked! And confused and said "How did she know about that message? Oh my gosh, did she lied on me?" I asked.
"Emmerey is the next victim. I investigated about this too long. And I think that, anyone who received the crumpled paper and read what was written on it will die." He said. "I'm not pretty sure, Ann. I just guessed it." He followed.
"If you're right, it means Emmerey supposed to be die tonight? Right?" I asked.
"Yes." He replied.
"I think that will not happen, Emmerey is on their home tonight, I told her to stay at home and don't go to anywhere alone, and the school was already closed. So I think, she's safe." I said.
"I'm sorry for that, but remember what I have said to you a while ago. The killer was not alive. Its a ghost." He said.
"But who is that ghost? Do you have any idea? Who is she? She's a girl right? Because the voice we heard in the voice recorder was a voice of a lady." I said.
"Yes, she is. I thought it was Ms. Oran." He said.
I was shocked, and let him to finished what he was saying.
"This was all started when Ms. Oran died, right? She lost her eyes and there's no wounds in her body, because she was poisoned by someone. And that was the caused of her death and also the other victims." He said.
"But how could Ms. Oran do that? She was nice and lovely teacher. What was the reason?" I said.
"I don't know." He said.
I couldn't believe in what Levin said. Because I knew how good Ms. Oran was. But I need to try to talk to Ms. Oran.
Me and Levin think a plan how to communicate to Ms. Oran. And I remembered the voice recorder that I putted inside the abandoned comfort room. It was so lucky that I brought my gadgets when I came to the school. I had set up the speaker, and turned on the recorder. We were in the gym right now waiting for the killer to speak.
We heard something strange, there's a sounds of footsteps. And then, there was a voice of a lady singing a lullaby, and that was so creepy. And then..........
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" a loud shot came from the recorder.
"What was that?!!!" I asked Levin and started to shiver.
"Sssshhh, listen." He said and covered my mouth.
(In the recorder)
"Hello there, Emmerey's voice was so nice to hear right? I know, I know you wanted me to talk to you, the both of you. I was there, and I was listening. Sorry Levin, but I'm not Ms. Oran, duuh? That nice and lovely teacher like what Ann said can't do what I'm doing to all of her students." (lauging)
"What did you do to Emmerey?! Who are you?! Why are you doing this?!" I asked and cried.
"Oh, Ann my sweet, sweet Ann. Stop crying, don't worry I'm going to sing a good song for you." She said. And she started to sing.
I cried a lot, when she was started to sing the "Love of a friend". And now I already knew who she is.
"Levin, we are wrong, she's not a ghost. Man, go home. Leave me alone here. You are not safe here. I know already who she is. I can manage this, just go home." I said and smiled to Levin.
"No, I will stay here. It is too dangerous here when you stay here alone." He said.
"No! Please! Go home! Go out to this school! I promised! Tomorrow, this creepy happening to this school will be gone!" I said.
I ran into the abandoned C.R and left Levin.
(In the abandoned C.R)
"Oh you're here, Ann."
"Why? And how? You were with us, when we were planning to know who is the killer right? And we saw someone wearing a mask at the hidden camera. How it cou......"
"Ssshhh! I told someone who will do that for me. I need to disguise."
"Stop this. Forget what was happened to you. Forgive those people who insulted and judged you in your physical appearance."
"Idiot! They deserve that! They deserve to lost their eyes and die! They were only focusing in the appearance of a person! There were so many times I showed them that I'm beautiful inside! I loved them more than I could! But what they returned to me?! They insulted me! Why? Because I'm dark, ugly and poor?! They deserve that, Ann!"
"I know they were wrong! But this is too much! You are a good friend, I know that. But how could you do these all. You killed many students! Even Ms. Oran, Angelina and our friend....Febie!"
"Shut up! Febie was not my friend anymore! She insulted me! And that was not an exemption for me! She bullied me! Even Angelina and Ms. Oran! They are all bullshit!"
"Rochelle... I promised to myself that I will find out the killer who killed to my best friend, Febie. I said to myself that I will take revenge for her! To give her justice! And now, you are here, saying everything. You are so freaky! Ugly inside and out! Your heart is dark like your skin! Poor, Rochelle! Now, I can say that , YOU REALLY DESERVE ALL OF THESE WORDS! And this night I'm going to end this nightmare in DIPLO University!
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh"
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(Sounds of police car)
"Arrest her! Carry this body its dead."
"Can you please tell me your name? Don't worry. I won't do anything to you."
"I'm.......... Rochelle Lincoln"
THE END
All students are scared to go in the school and attend their classes. But the school administrators promised us, that they will take care of us. We students don't have a choice, but just to attend our classes and go to this freaky school!
In our school, there are two sheriffs assigned in every floor of the buildings. So we feel a little safety.
Anyway, I'm Ann Zamora, 4th year college, and I'm going to tell to you, what is happening in our school. If you are reading this right now, please don't be remain silent. Tell this to anyone, and think a plan how you can help us. I'm just writing down what is happening in our school, we don't know who will be the next victim, but if ever I'm the next, I hope that, you will do something to help and give justice for us victims. Use your eyes. I'm going to tell to you when it was started to happen.
I was 1st year highschool before, when I met my friends. They are; Febie, Remart, Rochelle, Elyssa and Emmerey. We were so happy to met each other. One day, our professor in our major subject, Ms.Oran, announced that we were having a trip in San Fernando Forest and Beach Resort, to take a pictures and make a novel using those beautiful places. We were so excited that time, all of my classmates were excited too. But that excitement, turned into sadness. That night, we were all busy in readying our things for the next day trip. And then, we all received a message in our group chat from our classmate, Angelina. She said that Ms.Oran were dead. We were shocked. We asked Angelina how could she said that, where and how she knew that news. And she told us this:
"I'm sorry guys about this sad news. I'm really sorry. I didn't do anything for Ms. Oran. Forgive me guys, forgive me."
"Angelina? what's wrong with you? we don't get what are you saying. Please girl, tell us what happened. We're here for you, don't worry."
"hey? Angelina? are you still there? come on, reply to us."
Angelina didn't reply anymore, and the next day, in our class, Sir. Ellorin told to us what was happened to Ms. Oran, he said that, Ms.Oran found in the abandoned comfort room in fourth floor in the main building. He said, Ms.Oran was not injured, they didn't know what was the reason and caused of her death. And he followed and said that, Ms.Oran lost her eyes, maybe the killer took her eyes.
That tragedy and murder happened in August 5, 2001. And that was the beggining. Until now, the killer kills one student in a day. 7 students were killed in a week. And we still don't know who the killer is.
After what was happened to Ms.Oran, we received again a bad news, a really bad news, August 2, 2001, Tuesday, 10PM. I recieved a call from my friend Febie, she told me that Angelina was murdered in the school, and found her inside the comfort room. Same place and same on what happened to Ms. Oran, again, the killer took off Angelina's eyes. I was shocked, and I said to Febie;
"Are you kidding? That's not funny man!"
"Come on, Ann! I'm not kidding! I'm serious! They saw Angelina inside the C.R, the same place where Ms. Oran found! Angelina was my close friend too, so there is no great reason that I will use her in this creepy and bullshit bad news!"
"Okay, I'm sorry. I understand what your feeling right now. But, that was so impossible, how could Angelina killed in the school? She's absent right?"
"Yes, I know. I'm really scared. I don't know what to do, Ann."
Febie cried when she was telling that. I need to be strong for her, even I feel scared also that time.
August 3, 2001, I came to school, and I saw many students and police were standing in the abandoned comfort room. I knew there was dead there again, but I didn't expect what I saw.
I saw Febie! Carried by the police. She's dead! I was shocked! I didn't know what to do! I asked myself, why was she?! Why Febie?!
In that day when I saw Febie without eyes and dead, I promised to myself that I will take revenge to which killer did this!
After Ms. Oran, Angelina, and Febie's death, the killer kill more students, the killer didn't stop, until now. Many students were left and transfered to the other schools but they were not exempted. The kille and killed them. I don't killer reason why he/she doing that! But their dead bodies found in the abandoned comfort room of DILPO University.
I know there is something strange happening in our school. I need to know who is the killer, I need to know why she/he doing this! As what I promised before, I will find him/her!
It's now September 1, 2001. There's no new! The killer still kill students. We. Remart, Rochelle, Elyssa and Emmerey were planning to find out who is the killer, so we putted a microchip camera in the wall of fourth floor near in the abandoned C.R. We also put, a tiny voice recorder inside of the C.R. So that, we will know who is the killer. Because I know, later the killer will kill another victim again.
We've decided to have an overnight to my house to watch what will happen.
"Do you think we will find out who's the killer tonight?" Remart asked me.
"I hope, Remart. I'm praying for that." I replied.
"But, what if we will find out him/her? What will we do? Do we tell this to the police?" Rochelle asked me.
"No, no one will know about this." I replied.
We are waiting tonight, and then......
"Ann! come here! There is someone go to the C.R." Elyssa said.
"Turn on the recorder, faster!" I shouted to Emmerey.
We are listening, there's silence at first. Until we heard a strange voice, a voice of a woman saying:
"Hello guys, I know you're listening to me right now. You are so naughty guys. And I like that. I really like that. I just want you to know that, I know who you are. I know the names of five naughty students listening to me right now. See you,soooooooon." (laughing like an EVIL)
I can't speak, before the strange woman left the abandoned C.R, she waved her hands to the hidden camera, and gave us a creepy flying kissed.
"Oh my God! what the hell is going on? Who's that lady, guys?! I'm scared." Elyssa said.
"I think we did a wrong thing! We are all in danger guys!" Emmerey said and she's crying rigth now.
"What if one of us are the next victim? She said she knew us! What if I'm next?! What if......." Remart said
"STOP!!! Stop panicking guys!!!" I shouted.
"We need to tell this to the police" Rochelle said and picked up her phone.
I grab her hand, and get the phone. And said:
"No! No one will know about this! Even you tell this to the police or not, she will do bad to us! We need to be ready! We need to be strong!" I said.
Honestly, I feel scared too. Like what my friends feel. But we need to face and fight this feeling.
After that night, and the Saturday and Sunday passed. And now, its Monday again, I woke up, fixed myself and go to school.
I saw Emmerey ran to me while crying.
"Hey? Why are you crying?!" I asked her.
At first, she can't tell what was happended, because she was shivering and crying. I gave her a water, and we seated down to the bench.
"Ann... I saw the lady, I saw the killer looking at me. she's wearing a joker mask like what she wore when we saw her in the camera." She said.
"And then?"I asked her.
"She threw this crumpled paper to me, I didn't open this, I don't want." She said.
"Give me the paper." I said.
Emmerey gave the paper to me, I opened it and I red it.
"See you in the abandoned place, Emmerey."
I crumpled again the paper, Emmerey asked me what was the written on the paper. But I didn't tell to her.
"Nothing, I want you to stay at your house with your parents. Don't go out alone, alright?" I said to her and she nod.
I brought a knife and came to the abandoned C.R, and waited for the killer. I seated down on the wide sink of the C.R. And I heard a footstep coming from the C.R. So I walked slowly and hide at the back of the door. I brought out the knife and hold it hardly.
The stranger came inside already, he walked, and when I saw her that she had her back. I ran to her and pointed the knife in her neck.
“Don’t move! Or else I am going to kill you!" I said.
"Hey, are you the killer?" A voice of man said.
"Are you a boy?!" I asked
"Yes, please don't kill me!" he begged.
"What are you doing here?" I said.
"I know you are not the killer, because the killer is already dead." He said.
I released my arms to his neck, and dropped the knife.
"What are you saying?" I asked.
"She's dead, I mean she is ghost." He said and looked to me.
"Are you kidding me?!" I shouted.
"Of course not! Anyway, I'm Levin. Come on, let's go out. It's safe here, she's coming." He said and holds my hands and pulled me to go out.
We ran and stopped in front of the DILPO University Gym. It was already 8PM. And we need to stay there because the school was already closed.
He told me everything.
"Why are you there?" I asked.
He looked at me and said “I just want to make sure that you are safe."
"What? How did you.......?"
"Your friend Emmerey is my classmate in Philippine History, and she told me to follow and take care of you. Because she knows that you are going to meet the killer, like what the killer wanted to Emmerey do." He explained.
I was shocked! And confused and said "How did she know about that message? Oh my gosh, did she lied on me?" I asked.
"Emmerey is the next victim. I investigated about this too long. And I think that, anyone who received the crumpled paper and read what was written on it will die." He said. "I'm not pretty sure, Ann. I just guessed it." He followed.
"If you're right, it means Emmerey supposed to be die tonight? Right?" I asked.
"Yes." He replied.
"I think that will not happen, Emmerey is on their home tonight, I told her to stay at home and don't go to anywhere alone, and the school was already closed. So I think, she's safe." I said.
"I'm sorry for that, but remember what I have said to you a while ago. The killer was not alive. Its a ghost." He said.
"But who is that ghost? Do you have any idea? Who is she? She's a girl right? Because the voice we heard in the voice recorder was a voice of a lady." I said.
"Yes, she is. I thought it was Ms. Oran." He said.
I was shocked, and let him to finished what he was saying.
"This was all started when Ms. Oran died, right? She lost her eyes and there's no wounds in her body, because she was poisoned by someone. And that was the caused of her death and also the other victims." He said.
"But how could Ms. Oran do that? She was nice and lovely teacher. What was the reason?" I said.
"I don't know." He said.
I couldn't believe in what Levin said. Because I knew how good Ms. Oran was. But I need to try to talk to Ms. Oran.
Me and Levin think a plan how to communicate to Ms. Oran. And I remembered the voice recorder that I putted inside the abandoned comfort room. It was so lucky that I brought my gadgets when I came to the school. I had set up the speaker, and turned on the recorder. We were in the gym right now waiting for the killer to speak.
We heard something strange, there's a sounds of footsteps. And then, there was a voice of a lady singing a lullaby, and that was so creepy. And then..........
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!" a loud shot came from the recorder.
"What was that?!!!" I asked Levin and started to shiver.
"Sssshhh, listen." He said and covered my mouth.
(In the recorder)
"Hello there, Emmerey's voice was so nice to hear right? I know, I know you wanted me to talk to you, the both of you. I was there, and I was listening. Sorry Levin, but I'm not Ms. Oran, duuh? That nice and lovely teacher like what Ann said can't do what I'm doing to all of her students." (lauging)
"What did you do to Emmerey?! Who are you?! Why are you doing this?!" I asked and cried.
"Oh, Ann my sweet, sweet Ann. Stop crying, don't worry I'm going to sing a good song for you." She said. And she started to sing.
I cried a lot, when she was started to sing the "Love of a friend". And now I already knew who she is.
"Levin, we are wrong, she's not a ghost. Man, go home. Leave me alone here. You are not safe here. I know already who she is. I can manage this, just go home." I said and smiled to Levin.
"No, I will stay here. It is too dangerous here when you stay here alone." He said.
"No! Please! Go home! Go out to this school! I promised! Tomorrow, this creepy happening to this school will be gone!" I said.
I ran into the abandoned C.R and left Levin.
(In the abandoned C.R)
"Oh you're here, Ann."
"Why? And how? You were with us, when we were planning to know who is the killer right? And we saw someone wearing a mask at the hidden camera. How it cou......"
"Ssshhh! I told someone who will do that for me. I need to disguise."
"Stop this. Forget what was happened to you. Forgive those people who insulted and judged you in your physical appearance."
"Idiot! They deserve that! They deserve to lost their eyes and die! They were only focusing in the appearance of a person! There were so many times I showed them that I'm beautiful inside! I loved them more than I could! But what they returned to me?! They insulted me! Why? Because I'm dark, ugly and poor?! They deserve that, Ann!"
"I know they were wrong! But this is too much! You are a good friend, I know that. But how could you do these all. You killed many students! Even Ms. Oran, Angelina and our friend....Febie!"
"Shut up! Febie was not my friend anymore! She insulted me! And that was not an exemption for me! She bullied me! Even Angelina and Ms. Oran! They are all bullshit!"
"Rochelle... I promised to myself that I will find out the killer who killed to my best friend, Febie. I said to myself that I will take revenge for her! To give her justice! And now, you are here, saying everything. You are so freaky! Ugly inside and out! Your heart is dark like your skin! Poor, Rochelle! Now, I can say that , YOU REALLY DESERVE ALL OF THESE WORDS! And this night I'm going to end this nightmare in DIPLO University!
Aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh"
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(Sounds of police car)
"Arrest her! Carry this body its dead."
"Can you please tell me your name? Don't worry. I won't do anything to you."
"I'm.......... Rochelle Lincoln"
THE END